I'm the nice guy.
I'm the one that sets everything aside
if he sees you in trouble.
I'm the one who puts things in perspective
the one who tells you to take it easy.
I'll bend over to accomodate your wishes
to see to it that you smile.
I'm the one that takes care of things,
each time there's something to be done.
I'll look for a million ways to satisfy you
A thousand means to make it happen.
I'm the one you turn to each time you're hurt.
I'm the go-to guy.
But there's a thin line.
And the day that line gets crossed......
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12 comments:
AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE \:D/
u sound so macho \m/
loved it :D
u sound like jay singh rathore from jaane tu ya jaane naa :D
Yes yes, all this machogiri will go into the gutter after you face a Sumo Boyfriend of a girl that you like :|
So sweet...straight out of movie :-D
Honestly the whole poem seemed to sound to like indifferently same "me" kinda , BUT the last line made all the difference !! Nice work ya !
oh my!!:)
gud one..relle gud :))loved the flow...n the last line ofcourse:))
aha! The last line leaves me with so much to ponder about :P.
PS - I liked your previous layout better :P.
Hi Shaunak,
I accidentally stumbled upon your blog. In fact I was looking for a scientific article online for my MS thesis when I came across this. You are immensely talented.
I read this poem, the one on bombay, abt adults, the education system and the Neha series at a stretch! They are all too good!
The Neha series left me tickled as to who the characters might be from SHHS, so I am daring a guess by messaging you on facebook. Please dont be offended if I go wrong!
Please consider writing a book seriously.
Hey Sneha,
How in the world did a scientific search for an MS thesis get you here! :D
I've had an idea for a book for quite some time. Just that I need the time to materialize it.
Your guesses were spot on. Check your FB for the rest.
And needless to say, stick around and keep reading!
Cheers!
- S -
Awesome one.. and totally you!!!
Thank you so much :)
Pondered a lot on it actually!
Layout changed again ;)
Thank you divsi! :)
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