He ran, blood pulsating in his veins. “No no no, I won’t go back to that hellhole!” The world was a blur. Muffled sounds of padded feet drew closer. They were at his ankles. A bolt of shooting pain as the canines dug into his spine and his body fell, limp.
A growl.
SNAP!
Darkness.
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The Gang of Kozhikkode
5 months ago
18 comments:
Whoa. I've been meaning to try my hand at 55 fiction for a while now. Was that really 55 words? That's all you get? I tip my hat to you, sir, for telling a story in that small space!
In 55 words, you made me cringe!
@ Amandasaurus
Yep, 55 words is all you get..guess that's where the fun is, telling a tale in so few words. That was my first attempt at it. Hope I did justice to it :)
@ One Sassy Girl
Thank you so much! I marvel at the power of words in weaving imagination into reality.
It was an honour making you cringe :)
:O:O:O:O gud one....scary gothic gruesomeee!!! lol but a lovely read!:)
cheerz!
amazing one...one of these is on d way on my blog as well ;)...keep writing :)
Cool but could have been better with a shocking ending...
Take care and keep writing..........
Wow..nice!! Its a challenge to tell a tale in 55 words! Good job
Reminds me of Dean in Supernatural being dragged to hell by some hellhounds. Captivating
:( y cant i write 55 fiction... It was good... how can people explain so well in less words...
Ok i have never written 55fiction and Im not even a fan of em'. This one was nice. But I prefer the longer stories :P
Cheers,
Annie.
@ Divsi
lol thanks!
Cheers!
@ Umesh
As I said, my umbrella's ready for the rain :D
@ Thousif Raja
Ah, I guess so. What that ending would have been, well, my guess is as good as yours :)
Cheers and hope see you around more often :)
@ Insignia
Give it a shot. You tell some fascinating tales yourself.
@ ladytruth
Whoa! Now that you mention it, it reads more exciting than what I'd imagined!
P.S. The world is full of Supernatural followers it seems. So many of my friends are crazy for it...well, including me, but I missed the last season completely :(
@ Deepika
Give it a shot. It's definitely worth it. And who knows, those 55 words may grow into a 55 chapter novel right before your eyes.
@ Ice Maiden
Hmm...try doing one yourself Annie, it's challenging but leaves a lot to the interpretation of the reader.
But personally, I agree with you wholeheartedly. I'm writing a piece of fiction myself...but pretty much at a block for a long time.
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